We screened the rough cut for our music video to our class and received some feeback:
Positive:
- Protagonists lip singing looked realistic and gave effect of verisimilitude
- Projections of Brighton over protagonists face gave an interesting visual effect
- Montage based editing was effective and fun to watch
Improvements:
- Less internal shots of the car/include external shots with movement to make more interesting
- Need more shots of the friends and close up's to establish bond with audience
- Make more performance based as the 'meat shots' are of protagonist singing
- Shots of friends in the car
- Movement of camera in performance shots using the rig to intercut and provide extra angles
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